Monday, March 8, 2010

Wonderful Gujarati Creation- Dil puche che maaru..


In today's Fast life we dont have time for ourself or for anybody. We just wake up in the morning, work like an artificial robot and Go to Bed at late night with lots of work pressure and tension.

well but with this we are missing out true life.
Read this and ask your self..
Is it true for You?
Do you also feel like this?
Do you like it?
I will be glad if u share your thoughts in comments...


Dil puche che maaru,
are dost tu kya jaay che?

Jarak to nazar naakh,
saame kabar dekhay che.

Na vyavhaar sachvaay che,
na tehavar sachvaay che.
Diwali hoi ke holi,
badhu office ma j ujvaay che.

Aa badhu to thik hatu,
pan hadd to tya thaay che.....
Lagan ni kankotri male,
tya shrimant ma maand javaay che.

Dil puche che maaru, are dost tu kya jaay che?

5 aankdana pagaar che,
pan potana maate 5 minute pan kya vapraay che.
patni no phone 2 minute ma kaapi nakhe,
pan client no call kya kapaay che.

phone book bhari che mitro thi,
pan koinaay gher kya javaay che.
have to gharna prasango pan halfday ma ujvaay che.

Dil puche che maaru, are dost tu kya jaay che?

koine khabar nathi aa rasto kya jaay che.
thaakela che badha chhata, loko chaalta j jaay che.
koik ne saame rupiya to koik ne dollar dekhay che.

tame j kaho mitro su aanej jindagi kehvaay che?
Dil puche che maaru, are dost tu kya jaay che?


Thanx..
Special Thanks to One of our friend Mitul who send this beautiful creation.

13 comments:

  1. Hey nice one hetal and you being a SEO by profeesion will go a long way as a blogger and by the way thanks for ur valuable comments, its much appreciated

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  2. nice poem...liked it...

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  3. Indeed a good ghazal...
    Would like to know the name of its creator....

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  4. Hi All,

    Creator of this Gazal is PREMAL VALA. He is presently working as Project Manager in one of the leading IT Company. You can see his live performance of this gazal at

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJc00kP6DTA

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  5. Last Para is missing in this line, which goes like

    Badal ta aa pravah ma aapda sanskar dhovai chhe,
    Aavnari pedhi puchse sanskruti kone kevay chhe,
    Ek vaar to dil ne sambhdo, baki man to kayam munjay chhe,
    chalo jaldi nirnay laiye manu haju pan samay baki dekhay chhe.

    Dil Puchhe Chhe Maru aare dost tu kya jaye chhe.

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  6. Thanx Premal Vala..

    for giving original link of your Gazal and also completing Gazal. I really love your Gazal. Keep working on such a tochy gazals and also share with us.

    Thank You.

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  7. It's Very Nice I like it.In all of the world No one is bigger than Mother,Motherland And Mothertounge.I share with you one nice blog http://amulyagujarat.blogspot.com/
    I am also In Seo Industries.

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  8. Thanks Hetal,

    For your complements, Just wanted to complete this gazal and wanted to assure that credit reaches to right person, that was the only reason behind my comments.

    PREMAL

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  10. In all of the world No one is bigger than Mother,Motherland And Mothertounge.Really, it's very nice poem..............

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  11. its really very nice poem..... its discribe our life truly.....

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